I watched all the birds go by,
I watched the ghost of you haunting by,
by the memories of u i tried to defy.
I watched the crystal clear lake,
I watched all the relation turn fake,
I watched them take my heart out of sight,
and then faded the dimmest hope of light.
I watched the trees giving its life and shade,
I watched there leaves go and then fade,
I watched them tearing my life apart and cant ask why?
but i guess that was a price to be a nice guy.
I watched the pleasant rain pour so heavy and fast,
I watched protector become destroyer at last,
I watched all mist coming and i could not see me,
and then it was all I which used to be US and WE.
at the end of the day you were all gone
and i still stood there all alone and torn
into the shred of pieces of memories u left
and due to them till date i have not slept
all i did was just watch ur thought
i watched the glimpse of u i caught
i watched ur love fade away
and watched u go ur way...
i just stood there and watched and watched and watched......
Looks like I'm the first one to comment... lol
ReplyDeleteWell the poem is really deep and thoughtful but I hoped for a happier ending. Well it's what it is. Good work though... Keep posting =]
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ReplyDeletelovely thoughts dude ,keep it up
ReplyDeletethanks guys
ReplyDeletethis is so wow ! touches the soul of anyone who has ever lost in love.. grt work.. !
ReplyDeleteawsm wording..grt work..keep it up..:))
ReplyDeletethis is ur best till date :)
ReplyDeletethanks ankita....
ReplyDeletei know aki.....
gud job done mate......
ReplyDeletethis poem hits every1s heart ...
luved it ....
thanks motu....
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